翻译战役Gwyndlegar
本帖最后由 一窍不通 于 2015-3-21 21:12 编辑开始数周了的翻译。。总是打局什么的没翻译完{:146:}，大家来监督下吧。。目前翻译进度约为：100%
翻译的不太好请谅解。。嗯……有什么建议提出来就好，我不会生气的。{:146:}
问题
开始后数分钟有一句话总是显示为英文，但似乎在编辑器里是中文，不知为何。在翻译完成后会再做检查，看看效果如何。已解决
有两首英文诗不太好翻译，求大神帮助。（见4楼）已解决
很多小问题待修正基本完成
支持本项目，出资9000翔鹰币无偿赞助给楼主，如果楼主能够如期翻译完成，将额外得到200耕战的奖励。希望能在后期的语句润色上多下写功夫，不通顺的句子可以单独列出来在帖子里寻求帮助。 翻譯連續顯示指令的動態對白未注意前後內容、格式一致，例如以下兩組馬路里恩的話：
「马路里恩：你们跟到这里实在是不明智！」
「马路里恩：你们跟到这里实在是不明智!我知道你的意图是什么，并且我知道你永远也不可能成功。」
「马路里恩：激情？爱？那些胡说的东西在寡不敌众的情况下只是个笑话。」
「马路里恩：激情？爱？那些胡说的东西在寡不敌众的时候只是个笑话。你们做得很好，你们已经做出了决定！士兵们，攻——」
另外，部份文字突然插入一些多餘符號，例如「达卢：似乎那些巡逻护卫又去执行新的命令了。但他们为什么让这里完全没人来防守？」之前有一個問號。
本帖最后由 一窍不通 于 2015-3-19 06:39 编辑
似乎是一首爱情诗。。翻译有点困难，希望擅长者能帮一下忙。。如果实在没人也没关系，我尽量翻译吧。似乎不用翻译的特别好，因为之前有对话提到，这首诗并不是什么好诗，只不过是一个很爱一个女孩的人用心写的，并不一定多么有水平。
" You my love
Are like a dove.
Like the rain longs for the grass so green,
I long for you to come onto me.
But, alas, between us stand an evil witch,
And as you know I'm not that rich.
I can't afford to bribe her guards,
Although my heart could leap the whole 10 million yards.
Cut off from you I stand alone,
And in my sorrow I cry and moan.
For you, and only you, are the light of my life,
To get to you I will strife.
Word can't express my deepest feeling,
But perhaps it will do some healing.
Until we meet again, my love.
Yours, Larry. "
发现还有一首回应诗，24。。还是也发上来求助吧。。
"Dear Larry, my little dove,
I miss you more than you can imagine,
More than my heart can take.
A moment does not pass without me starting to think about you.
I wish we could be together, together really soon.
I am so tired of waiting, so tired of living in the cold on my own.
Every day I wish you were here, I wish you would come.
But we have to wait even longer, I'm afraid.
The witch controls every road, no path is safe.
I'm rather alone for a lifetime than knowing I sent you away to die.
Find patience, and if you do, so will I.
All my love, Jane."
本帖最后由 0000`` 于 2015-3-19 08:50 编辑
…… TT出了9000鹰币。。 那我就出150耕战支持楼主吧！ @无人接手 顺便帮楼主找找翻译的一些语句错误。 刚测试一会儿发现一堆问题，汗。。。慢慢修改中 （You my love
Are like a dove.）
霖雨澤綠草， Like the rain longs for the grass so green,
伊人慰吾心。 I long for you to come onto me.
［You my love
欲偕君比翼， Are like a dove.］
惡巫擋道途。 But, alas, between us stand an evil witch,
苦無囊中金， And as you know I'm not that rich.
貨賄攔路卒。 I can't afford to bribe her guards,
心跡橫越千萬里， Although my heart could leap the whole 10 million yards.
獨留此身哭且愁， Cut off from you I stand alone,
And in my sorrow I cry and moan.
但得卿卿燿我生， For you, and only you, are the light of my life,
遠行求晤無所惜， To get to you I will strife.
（Word can't express my deepest feeling,）
寄語詩文強自寬， But perhaps it will do some healing.
筆墨難訴心中情， ［Word can't express my deepest feeling,］
情深託寓是何處？ Until we meet again, my love.
破鏡重圓自有期。 Yours, Larry. " 基本上快完成了！{:146:} 支持楼主，楼主加油。 支持楼主，楼主加油。
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