heidousishi 发表于 2010-7-9 20:02:20

Criticism

Oh,mine...Howk's MOD is too bad!Some MOD doesn't like 《Te Zhong Bing Age》.《Te Zhong Bing Age》it isn't very good either.i don't like them very much.They are clever,but they is too lazy.Their MOD is so boring.But i see a lot of howker praise the MOD.The howk foum is crazy.No,the China is crazy!

超级民兵 发表于 2010-7-9 20:46:00

I cannot understand what you said
I believe you just practised English...

猪崽 发表于 2010-7-10 00:53:12

What's howk ? I want to understand

[ 本帖最后由 猪崽 于 2010-7-10 01:00 编辑 ]

Ikarus 发表于 2010-7-10 08:17:43

pretty english……

yi落后 发表于 2010-7-10 09:22:22

What's“howk”? Do you want to say Captian Hook?Or Peter·Pan?


什么是“howk”？你想说Hook船长？还是彼得·潘？

[ 本帖最后由 yi落后 于 2010-7-10 16:21 编辑 ]

0.03bx 发表于 2010-7-10 14:32:27

Speechless......
                                       
PS:howk?hawk?

_MZR_阔比多华 发表于 2010-7-11 13:53:44

Criticism (......maybe complaint or something else I can't think up now)
Oh,mine...Howk's (Hawk's) MOD is (MODS are) too bad!Some MOD (MODS) doesn't (aren't) like 《 (This punc mark is not available in English) Te Zhong Bing Age (Age of Unique Units or special arms) 》.《Te Zhong Bing Age》it isn't very good either.i don't like them very much.They are (who are they?) clever,but they is(are) too lazy.Their MOD is so boring.But i see a lot of howker (hawkers) praise the MOD.The howk foum (hawk forum) is crazy.No,the China is crazy!

PS:
1. Confusing expression, senseless talk.
2. Chaotic proof.
3. A space should be placed after each punc mark.
4. "PS" is not Chinglish.

sd0061 发表于 2010-7-11 15:22:42

Maybe I can find a drill

猪崽 发表于 2010-7-12 11:26:09

I understand now……
So，if you think hawk's MOD doesn't good，You can five four（54，please say is in Chinese） it

0.03bx 发表于 2010-7-12 15:08:32

原帖由 _MZR_阔比多华 于 2010-7-11 13:53 发表 https://www.hawkaoe.net/bbs/images/common/back.gif
Criticism (......maybe complaint or something else I can't think up now)
Oh,mine...Howk's (Hawk's) MOD is (MODS are) too bad!Some MOD (MODS) doesn't (aren't) like 《 (This punc mark is not available...

PS:
Their MOD is so boring(Their MODS are so boring)

[ 本帖最后由 blgzzycsx 于 2010-7-12 15:10 编辑 ]

_MZR_阔比多华 发表于 2010-7-12 15:54:50

原帖由 blgzzycsx 于 2010-7-12 15:08 发表 https://www.hawkaoe.net/bbs/images/common/back.gif


PS:
Their MOD is so boring(Their MODS are so boring)

Thanks for pointing this out. In fact "Their MOD is so boring" doesn't have any grammar error either, howe'r "Their MODS are so boring" is better. {9}

陈勇全 发表于 2010-7-20 10:13:24

China won't crazy—　—　{35} {35}

chennan314 发表于 2010-10-7 15:11:57

This is an article named "Criticism" for Criticism.

yi落后 发表于 2010-10-26 21:34:43

KK,you fool!I'm sure I reverse white it......(I don't know how to say it in English)

[ 本帖最后由 yi落后 于 2010-10-27 20:52 编辑 ]

老胡V1 发表于 2010-10-26 23:13:52

I have never seen such a good postfor practicing correcting.

GIGN 发表于 2011-7-23 15:38:13

Limited English skill......

dareva 发表于 2012-3-4 00:39:48

佩服，佩服！











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