Criticism

heidousishi

Oh,mine...Howk's MOD is too bad!Some MOD doesn't like 《Te Zhong Bing Age》.《Te Zhong Bing Age》it isn't very good either.i don't like them very much.They are clever,but they is too lazy.Their MOD is so boring.But i see a lot of howker praise the MOD.The howk foum is crazy.No,the China is crazy!

超级民兵

I cannot understand what you said
I believe you just practised English...

猪崽

What's howk ? I want to understand

[ 本帖最后由 猪崽 于 2010-7-10 01:00 编辑 ]

Ikarus

pretty english……

yi落后

What's“howk”? Do you want to say Captian Hook?Or Peter·Pan?


什么是“howk”？你想说Hook船长？还是彼得·潘？

[ 本帖最后由 yi落后 于 2010-7-10 16:21 编辑 ]

0.03bx

Speechless......
                                         
PS:howk?hawk?

_MZR_阔比多华

Criticism (......maybe complaint or something else I can't think up now)
Oh,mine...Howk's (Hawk's) MOD is (MODS are) too bad!Some MOD (MODS) doesn't (aren't) like 《 (This punc mark is not available in English) Te Zhong Bing Age (Age of Unique Units or special arms) 》.《Te Zhong Bing Age》it isn't very good either.i don't like them very much.They are (who are they?) clever,but they is(are) too lazy.Their MOD is so boring.But i see a lot of howker (hawkers) praise the MOD.The howk foum (hawk forum) is crazy.No,the China is crazy!

PS:
1. Confusing expression, senseless talk.
2. Chaotic proof.
3. A space should be placed after each punc mark.
4. "PS" is not Chinglish.

sd0061

Maybe I can find a drill

猪崽

I understand now……
So，if you think hawk's MOD doesn't good，You can five four（54，please say is in Chinese） it

0.03bx

原帖由 _MZR_阔比多华 于 2010-7-11 13:53 发表
Criticism (......maybe complaint or something else I can't think up now)
Oh,mine...Howk's (Hawk's) MOD is (MODS are) too bad!Some MOD (MODS) doesn't (aren't) like 《 (This punc mark is not available  ...

PS:
Their MOD is so boring(Their MODS are so boring)

[ 本帖最后由 blgzzycsx 于 2010-7-12 15:10 编辑 ]

_MZR_阔比多华

原帖由 blgzzycsx 于 2010-7-12 15:08 发表


PS:
Their MOD is so boring(Their MODS are so boring)

Thanks for pointing this out. In fact "Their MOD is so boring" doesn't have any grammar error either, howe'r "Their MODS are so boring" is better. {9}

陈勇全

China won't crazy—　—　{35} {35}

chennan314

This is an article named "Criticism" for Criticism.

yi落后

KK,you fool!I'm sure I reverse white it......(I don't know how to say it in English)

[ 本帖最后由 yi落后 于 2010-10-27 20:52 编辑 ]

老胡V1

I have never seen such a good post  for practicing correcting.

GIGN

Limited English skill......

dareva

佩服，佩服！












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